Seems there’s this chick Jenny, and she’s, like, everywhere. Here’s my vision of Jenny Everywhere for the 2010 Jenny Day.
I’m including the original sketch as I actually like it better…
I see the problem, in the sketch you have the mouth properly lined under the nose and the eyes are set better with dark pupils. The face doesn’t look right in the inked drawing and it’s throwing off the whole piece.
Both are fine, but her mouth sits better in the raw sketch. Nice one!
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I see the problem, in the sketch you have the mouth properly lined under the nose and the eyes are set better with dark pupils. The face doesn’t look right in the inked drawing and it’s throwing off the whole piece.
Both are fine, but her mouth sits better in the raw sketch. Nice one!